| Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
| Janine Daniel | 7/28/2000 1:28:46 PM 3/15/2008 5:20:19 PM | 233 |
Autumn Splendor - re-written
Silent .....
majestic .....
golden and serene
are the words
that came to me
when I discovered
this beautiful scene
Autumn splendor at its best
Even a great artist
would be put to the test
to copy it so
in all of its making
would be to beat God
at his own creation
A flurry of leaves
across the ground
a gentle breeze
blowing on my neck
a sea of color
of russet tones
Autumn splendor at its best
By: Janine Daniel
Author's Comments
It's Autumn here in Australia now. It starts on the 1st of March.
I re-wrote this, 2006.
| Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
| Janine Daniel | 7/28/2000 1:28:46 PM 3/15/2008 5:20:19 PM | 233 |
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| Janine Daniel | janine@spinnys.com | www.spinnys.com |
Total Comments: 5
Comments | |||
| Sue Allie | bttfly9@yahoo.com | http://www.geocities.com/Heartland/Garden/9843 | 8/9/2000 10:18:43 PM |
| Janine, Such a beautiful scene! | |||
| MidnightRose | 3/10/2006 3:05:24 AM | ||
| Wow! Talk about painting a bright beautiful picture for us with words! And with the actual picture displayed makes even more vivid Janine. Is this a picture you took? Just stunning! ~Amy~ | |||
| dhicks | 3/10/2006 3:06:44 AM | ||
| Wow Janine, simply awesome write. Cheered me up today :) Dennis | |||
| lhrdina90 | 4/7/2006 6:43:46 AM | ||
Janine, oh my, your words are just beautiful and the picture you have found seems to fit it perfectly, you are an amazing writer with such grace for bringing words to life. Lori | |||
| Mindings | 4/7/2006 6:44:47 AM | ||
For colour, autumn takes some beating and your words really reflected this. A classic season poem from J9! Philip | |||
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