| Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
| Janine Daniel | 9/21/2000 4:13:03 PM 10/5/2009 4:17:31 PM | 217 |
Baby's Breath incl.photo of baby Indeya
Last week I held an angel,
Her mother placed her in my arms,
Her name was Indeya Lotus,
And I beheld her magic charms.
She gazed up at me intently,
I saw a brightness in her eyes,
Her tiny hand reached out for mine,
Grasped my finger then she smiled.
I touched her cheek so softly,
Loved the smoothness of her skin,
I held her close and cuddled her,
Felt my love surge from within.
To hear her gurgling laughter,
Was a really special treat,
I loved the smell of her baby's breath,
It was wonderfully fresh and sweet.
My beautiful baby grand daughter,
To my chest I held her near,
I'm very happy to meet you Indeya,
I whispered softly in her ear.
*Photo no longer available*
By: Janine Daniel
Author's Comments
Last week my daughter Trudie came here for a quick holiday
and I got to meet my grand daughter for the first time. She
is 7 months old and a little darling. In this poem I tried
to express the wonder of meeting her for the first time and
holding her in my arms.
| Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
| Janine Daniel | 9/21/2000 4:13:03 PM 10/5/2009 4:17:31 PM | 217 |
| Author | Web | |
| Janine Daniel | janine@spinnys.com | www.spinnys.com |
Total Comments: 17
Comments | |||
| Claud | klugecc@jps.net | 9/21/2000 6:50:31 PM | |
| Congrads on your new Grandchild. Your expression of love is very touching indeed. Give her big G'day from me. | |||
| Daniel A. Stafford | aqmstaffo@mailbag.com | 9/22/2000 4:08:17 AM | |
| Janine, This poem is so lovely! Your joy in your granddaughter shows through sweet and clear, and it has that natural, smooth flow to it that the best poems always do, because there is that something "right" with them. I hope Indeya reads this later in life and realizes she was welcomed into this world with open arms by her grandmother, a magical lady. Congratulations! | |||
| Trudie | nirvana60@go.com | 9/24/2000 6:12:59 AM | |
| What a wonderful tribute to your feelings. I thought it was a beautiful ode to your meeting. Yet another brilliant work. Congrats!... | |||
| MellyMoo | 10/4/2000 4:04:41 AM | ||
| I also had the pleasure of meeting your Grand- daughter and I must sau that you have captured the exact emotion one feels when meeting a new addition to a family.... I too also hope that Indeya is able to read this when she fgets older and know that she is very muched loved... Well done Spinny and keep it up.... :o) | |||
| Shannon Wendler | shannon7112@earthlink.net | 10/5/2000 8:35:47 PM | |
| Awwww this is a wonderful tribute and very touching indeed. I like the title on this Janine. Good work! | |||
| Jillian Stone | jillian2486@hotmail.com | 10/5/2000 8:39:30 PM | |
| Lovely poem.........wonderful title with so much meaning. | |||
| Maxine Transue | cuddles356@hotmail.com | 10/5/2000 8:43:04 PM | |
| Very sweet and wonderful...Maxine | |||
| Philip G Bell | philip@bell-redbourn.freeserve.co.uk | 10/5/2000 8:45:44 PM | |
| This is beautiful - nuff said! | |||
| Andrea Neumann | 10/7/2000 8:54:36 AM | ||
| The reading of this poem takes me back, to when my 2 daughters were born and the feeling I got when I held them for the first time. | |||
| John Stewart | jrs_66048@yahoo.com | 10/7/2000 10:23:01 AM | |
| A very pretty poem. Filled with meaning from within. John | |||
| foole | 10/7/2000 10:57:59 AM | ||
| Adorable, Spinny! Geez, better not show her to Casey, or else he'll be bugging me to take a trip south - WAY south!! | |||
| Shiela | 10/7/2000 11:00:11 AM | ||
| That's beautiful Spinny........ Both that beautiful baby and the poem. | |||
| Brian and Dee | 10/7/2000 11:02:54 AM | ||
| Awesome!!!.. | |||
| poeticpiers | 11/22/2005 6:38:58 AM | ||
| I too am enchanted by babies Janine no greater pleasure exists for me than to hold a baby. Ivor | |||
| Alaura dus | 11/22/2005 6:40:49 AM | ||
| awww... how sweeet :) My girls aren't quite to the age that they would make me a grandmother... but it's not too far away. I look forward to the experience, and having a baby to hold again. Enjoyed your poem, Janine :) ~Alaura | |||
| solante aretino | 11/24/2005 2:19:36 AM | ||
| This is so nice. I am always afraid I am going to drop them or something. sola | |||
| MrLeslie | 11/24/2005 2:21:10 AM | ||
| Awww lady Janine, this beaut of a poem touched my tough old heart and even my soul. A treasure. Beautiful writng lady artist! A gift. Well done again! MrLeslie. | |||
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