Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
Janine Daniel | 1/12/2001 6:36:07 AM 6/12/2007 3:28:51 PM | 53 |
Bed Of My Soul - Unmade (second try)
Bed of my soul
Wrapped up in sheets
Pillows for comfort
Of snow white soft fleece
Remove the top layer
Of padding for sleep
My soul reaches out
For a soul mate to keep
Bed of my soul
Of double bed size
Two beating hearts
Where soul dreams reside
Under my bed
My soul it does hide
Whispering secrets
Too shy to confide
Bed of my soul
Two souls merged as one
A blending of minds
Our dream time begun
Janine Daniel
By: Janine Daniel
Author's Comments
My second attempt with this topic. What do you think?
Author | Date Entered/Modified | Views |
Janine Daniel | 1/12/2001 6:36:07 AM 6/12/2007 3:28:51 PM | 53 |
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Janine Daniel | spinnys@hotmail.com | www.spinnys.com |
Total Comments: 2
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Shannon Wendler | 1/12/2001 7:20:41 AM | ||
You have such a creative mind Janine! Nice little twist here with this topic! Shannon | |||
Daniel A. Stafford | aqmstaffo@mailbag.com | 1/12/2001 12:41:38 PM | |
I like the metaphor here, too. It's a sweet poem and a unique perspective. |
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