From 12/04/2000
I'm going to have a bath today,
In runny gooey chocolate,
I'll slide right in and roll around,
And then I'm going to rotate!
Upon my tummy I'll sink right down,
And blow some great big bubbles,
I'll kick my feet and churn it up,
Until that chocolate's doubled.
With dripping fingers I will wash,
My hair with gluggy goo,
I'll mould it into chocolate peeks,
And make a new hair do.
I'll wash my feet between my toes,
Then behind my ears and I'm done,
Next I'll go and sit outside,
To dry in the midday sun.
By: Janine Daniel
Author's Comments
Hehehehe ......Comments:
| lhrdina90 | 10/12/2005 6:25:38 AM | ||
| LOL..
this is so good and just plain cute, you always put a smile on my face
and in my heart. Sorry though I will have to decline on joining, I
believe I would go into a diabetic coma..lol if I done that.. Thanks for
a brighter day.. Lori | |||
| Prince of Errin | 12/4/2000 10:03:30 AM | ||
| Chocoholic? Rolling on the floor laughing! Call Chocoholics Anonymous 0101010 just 1 more! | |||
| APoetsPerspective | 12/4/2000 10:04:33 AM | ||
| What a riot Janine! And the picture too! And it all rhymns and is in "good taste"! (pun intended) -j | |||
| Pam Drapala | 12/4/2000 10:15:40 AM | ||
| I just love this second poem. So cute. Hmmm, you must be a real lover of chocolate, right? | |||
| Mia Jennings | Mia@pconline.com | 12/4/2000 11:56:41 PM | |
| Oh my this was sooooooooo cute! This was a great read!! Thank you Mia | |||
| Claud | klugecc@jps.net | 12/5/2000 9:32:07 PM | |
| What a Gas!!!!! A CHOCOLATE BATH IS QUITE A TREAT ESPECIALLY FOR PRETTY MRS. PERHAPS, PERCHANCE, RESULTS WILL BE A MILLION CHOCOLATE KISSES. JANINE, YOU ARE TOO MUCH!! | |||
| Sue Allie | bttfly9@yahoo.com | www.geocities.com/bttfly9/ | 12/8/2000 4:54:50 AM |
| A wonderfully hilarious poem! You do it so well, Janine! | |||
| Rachelle Wiegand | 12/10/2000 2:46:58 AM | ||
| This is great, Janine! Very funny! | |||
| Pamela Drapala | 12/10/2000 2:48:46 AM | ||
| Cute, cute, cute! | |||
| Shannon Wendler | 12/14/2000 7:36:55 AM | ||
| This is WONDERFUL! And funny! Good Job Janine! Shannon | |||
| Melly Moo | myattm@dnr.qld.gov.au | 1/4/2001 4:22:10 AM | |
| One can only dream of bathing in chocolate....... Ummm.... Well done ..... Loved it heaps... | |||
| Shari Neumann (age 9) | 6/16/2001 5:46:46 AM | ||
| It looks like he's having a bath in sloppy poo! I can't stop laughing! | |||
| Tammy | 10/13/2005 4:12:10 AM | ||
| This is GREAT! LOL Tammy | |||
| Cheyanne | 10/14/2005 5:37:29 AM | ||
| YUMMY!!! But the pic........lol........oh man that is funny Janine! *Cheyanne* | |||
| Mindings | 11/4/2005 11:39:34 AM | ||
| Er... About these bubbles? J9 you are a gem! Philip | |||
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