A Tribute to our Love

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Janine Daniel	6/25/2000 1:19:54 PM 10/31/2009 2:12:50 PM	1716

A Tribute to our Love

My darling sweet man, 
Today is a special day......
A day to celebrate our love and for me to give you my gift 
And say thanks for loving me so....
Before you.... you see the person I have become 
Since having the pleasure of your friendship
Your love and your fun. 

I close my eyes and I sigh........ 
As I feel so warm and protected in your embrace.... 
My face pressed against your chest 
And our hearts pumping, throbbing, pulsing.....keeping pace, 
I love the smell of you....so special, so sweet, 
I breathe deeply in and give a little start 
As I feel your hand placed ever so gently atop my heart. 

Before our lips meet and we start to kiss...
I hear you moan and say...
Darling...... this is such bliss....
To be in your arms to hold and love you...well...
There's NOTHING in this world I'd rather do! 
A smile springs to my lips just as your lips meet mine 
And I think to myself 
Wow.......
That's so sweet..........
But I know one more thing that you love to do............
Aahh...... but that's our secret just between me and you, 
Your kiss tells me a lot more than words can ever say 
And my heart swells even more with my love for you today, 
I think to myself as I go weak in the knees............. 
Oooh my darling man.......... 
I am here to love you always ............
I give myself to you..............
A gift to pleasure and please! 

By: Janine Daniel

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A tribute to a very special love in my life

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Janine Daniel			6/25/2000 1:23:22 PM
I'm really sorry about the spacing. I didn't submit it this way. At this stage I've got  no idea how to fix it.
Sue	bttfly9@yahoo.com	http://www.geocities.com/Heartland/Garden/9843	7/14/2000 9:33:02 PM
To write such a poem, I feel one has to be truly in love with that person or at one time in their life had a special love. You have to experience it  to write it. It makes the poem all the more special!
Claud	klugecc@jps.net		7/19/2000 10:11:47 PM
Hi  It occurred to me that as poets we tend to be somewhat  self-centered at times and thereby miss a lot of good things that others have to offer. I, therefore, have undertaken to read and comment on all the poems posted on the 50 most veiwed and 50 most recent catagories. I can find some good in the poorest of poetry and something to critisize in the best of poetry. The project may take some time but the fact that you are  reading this should indicate that I've read this piece and enjoyed, at least, some if not all of what you ‘ve written. I'll leave the judging to the experts. It.s enough for me to know the you cared enough to share your work with us all. I would also encourage you all to share your thoughts with me and all the others that have contributed to this website. Just remember: A SONG IS NOT A SONG ‘TIL YOU SING IT A BELL IS NOT A BELL ‘TIL YOU RING IT LOVE IS NOT PUT IN YOUR HEART TO STAY LOVE IS NOT LOVE ‘TIL YOU GIVE IT AWAY Claud
Carol Richardson	dolly@bright.net		8/9/2000 7:22:48 PM
I liked it. I live this poem. Jim is my friend,lover and husband. Thank you Spinny. Carol
Maxine Transue			2/9/2001 6:13:44 AM
wow Janine this is a very good one...
Ron Purtlebaugh	rjpurt@bellsouth.net	http://www.underthepoemtree.com	5/12/2002 2:50:31 PM
Though I don't know you or your man, I do know you are both blessed to have one another, A Tribute To Our Love, is a very beautiful piece with an expression of love, though it be wonderful, must only be a slight reflection of the true love you share. Thank you for sharing this with us. Ron
Rachelle Wiegand	rwpoet@home.com		10/20/2000 4:40:28 AM
Janine, This is a lovely tribute to your love! I read it as if I were reading my sister's diary- I felt it was such a beautifully intimate piece. I enjoyed the expression of love. Thanks for letting us peek :) Rachelle
Philip G Bell	philip@bell-redbourn.freeserve.co.uk		10/26/2000 3:14:56 PM
Very sensuous and warm - beautifully written. Philip
Jeanie Johnson	wahconda@juno.com		10/26/2000 3:17:52 PM
Wonderful tribute to the one you love, Janine. Thanks for sharing it with the rest of us. Love and Light Jeanie
Janine Daniel	spinnys@hotmail.com	www.spinnys.com	11/6/2000 10:16:16 PM
The spacing is all fixed now. I love the editing thingy...:o)
Poetique			2/1/2001 11:14:16 AM
This one made my monitor steam up and it takes a POEM to do that!!! Romance and passion rolled into one piece. Good Work JD!! - P
Flutterwings			2/12/2001 9:11:56 PM
Fantabulous read! Packed full of romantic and deep inner emotional true love. The makings of a long beautiful romantic love. I stand and applaud an exciting piece... Love and peace ((~.~))
Trudie	(You have it.)		1/23/2002 3:03:24 AM
Wow! That was great! Well done. This is the first place I looked and there was your name! wow. I know that fella of yours! what a lucky  bloke!
SandDollar1			8/9/2005 8:53:35 AM
What a sweet tribute to someone dearly loved. Very nice, Janine. Annette
Stargazer			8/9/2005 8:55:24 AM
Nice piece. I look forward to reading more. Joelsz
Wanda Fable Weaver			8/9/2005 8:56:41 AM
Janine, This is a wonderful tribute to the love of your life. May you be blessed with many years together. Wanda
poeticpiers			8/11/2005 12:28:01 PM
How very pleasant to know that other couples feel as we do. Ivor
whatup64106			8/15/2005 6:01:02 AM
This is a great poem Janine
EagertoLearn			8/15/2005 6:02:33 AM
This is a beautiful write, Janine. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. ~Neha
eternity7112			8/21/2005 10:51:49 AM
This has to be a song!!! I could hear music all through out. BEAUTIFUL Janine. Just beautiful! QUOTE Oooh my darling man.......... I am here to love you always ............ I give myself to you.............. A gift to pleasure and please! Shannon
guardianofthenight			8/21/2005 10:54:09 AM
Janine I could hear music as well. Very lovely! Is this a song? Let's see.... my fave part has to be this; QUOTE I close my eyes and I sigh........ As I feel so warm and protected in your embrace.... My face pressed against your chest And our hearts pumping, throbbing, pulsing.....keeping pace, I love the smell of you....so special, so sweet, I breathe deeply in and give a little start  As I feel your hand placed ever so gently atop my heart. Good stuff here! ~~AMY~~
lhrdina90			8/23/2005 4:40:07 AM
Janine, this was just beautiful to read. It's as though you reached into my soul and knew my feelings, wow... teriffic job here lady... whooooo! Lori
xXNitaXx			8/31/2005 9:37:56 AM
WOW this makes me long for the day when I can feel this way about someone special...to me.  Being in love is the most beautiful poetry of all. Nita
Gillywoowong			9/3/2005 3:45:21 AM
A MASTERPIECE. IT BRINGS GOOD THINGS INTO MY HEART! YOU ARE STUNNING JANINE. Gilly
Tammy			1/10/2006 8:14:46 AM
oooooo.....seductive and romantic all in one Janine. Very nice indeedy!
Vivian			1/18/2006 9:47:13 AM
This is like one of those books you love to curl up with by a fireplace and totally get lost in what you are reading. Janine this is breath taking! I love this part, Before our lips meet and we start to kiss... I hear you moan and say... darling...... this is such bliss....
RonPrice			2/16/2006 10:22:34 AM
Why did I not meet you, say 40 to 50 years ago, when I was starting out? Such is life. To be able to say in words and write in words how you feel is an immense asset. It will help you down life's long road. And when, as Kathleen Raine writes, "if you can converse with that eternal wisdom in your poetry you will possess that genius which is at the heart of the true poetic. "(Kathleen Raine, The Inner Journey of the Poet and Other Papers, Allen and Unwin, London, 1982, p.72.)