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Shannon Wendler |
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| 12/8/2001 9:59:47 AM |
Impressive
you two! I can not tell who wrote what it all blends so well, the
description in this was so strong and powerful makes you escape into
this deadly passion. WOW!
Shannon |
Jill |
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| 12/8/2001 10:03:12 AM |
I
am impressed as well!!! This is so wild you two ... JANINE? Is that you
in there??? I am like Shannon. I can not tell who wrote what!
Powerful and strong, I love to see that in collabs! YOU GO GIRLS!!!
Jill |
Spaz |
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| 12/8/2001 10:04:43 AM |
I
am completely speechless... I could feel the anticipation and
everything when I read this... It was so weird, and I loved it!!!
Excellent job! |
Kathy |
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| 12/8/2001 10:06:09 AM |
Oh
BOY HOWDY!!! Was I ever in a trance reading this! passionate,
seductive, dark and powerful! That is all I have to say cuz the poem
speaks for itself here!
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Rachelle Wiegand |
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| 12/8/2001 10:08:25 AM |
Whoa!!
My Vampiresses!! Dark Ladies of the Night!! This is AWESOME!!! Is this
the first collaboration you two have ever worked on? I don't recall ever
reading one before. Well, you get two great writers together and the
only thing the end result could be is terrific and unexpected. This is
both.
We are lucky to be able to read the two of you here. One
day, I'll have to buy the book! This is spectacular, ladies!! So good to
see you guys writing together!
~Rachelle~ The Songbird |
Daniel A Stafford |
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| 4/19/2002 1:58:44 AM |
What
a glimpse into darkness - this is something that twists your insides to
taffy to read, yet it is so brilliantly worded you can't stop. I'll
give you two credit - when you put yourselves into a piece of writing,
there are no holds barred and no visions you two couldn't bring to
spellbinding light. This should be narrated by Rod Serling, it's that well done.
Dan |
Mark Woods |
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| 4/19/2002 2:01:54 AM |
Wow, that was a glimpse into darkness with unexpected illumination.... You two are great!! This was one you don't stop reading until it lets go of you. Awesome job!
Woody |
Silkie |
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| 4/19/2002 2:09:55 AM |
wowowowowoow!!
I didn't expect such a reaction to this piece. (Thanks for getting this
posted Janine, I've been hard up for internet time in the last week)
I
started out with a mental image and only a few words to go with it.
Janine hopped right in there and took this to a level I had not even
considered. She was wonderful to work with and I enjoyed it immensely.
Thanks for collaborating with me on this Janine, I can't wait to do it again and thank you all for your wonderful feedback!
Silkie |
Anaksonamoon |
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| 4/19/2002 2:12:46 AM |
A
great collaboration. I enjoyed the poem, the despair, the pain, I enjoy
poetry that comes from deep within the belly and slams right onto the
page. Really good! |
Janine Daniel | spinnys@hotmail.com | www.spinnys.com | 4/19/2002 2:16:59 AM |
Silkie and I won Featured Poets 12/12/01 at Literary Angels Poetry Club for our poem. |
Rachelle Wiegand |
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| 4/19/2002 2:19:37 AM |
Oh,
yes!!! I found this piece enticing!!! You two are both masters of
fantasy!! The thought of you guys writing together never occured to me
until you did, but I knew it would be good!!
Congratulations!!!
Whew---hoo!!
~Rachelle~ The Songbird |
Kathy |
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| 4/19/2002 2:23:13 AM |
Oh
WOW I am so happy to see this!!!! Well done Silkie and Janine. What a
wonderful collaboration and I can see why it is showcased at LA1 and on
at poetryclub.com
CONGRATS!! |
Jess |
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| 4/19/2002 2:25:47 AM |
I really enjoyed this poem, a wonderful showcase. Congrats! |
Jill |
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| 4/19/2002 2:30:03 AM |
WOW!
WEEEEEEEE! Amazing.....two poets I never thought would collab together!
Because your styles are so different. I am pretty impressed I guess you
can not put anything past writers!
Well done you two!
Jill |
Dan |
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| 4/19/2002 2:31:32 AM |
A big time congratulations you two, you totally rocked the house!
Dan |
Jill Stone |
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| 4/19/2002 2:45:24 AM |
Well, the name fits Janine and I am happy to see this showcased as well at poetryclub.com Way to go you two! And I would have never known either who wrote what. It blended so well, two thumbs up!
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Shannon Wendler |
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| 4/19/2002 2:47:40 AM |
I
was happy to give this award Janine and Silkie, you both write so well
but in different styles so when you collaborated together on this it
totally blew my mind WELL DONE!
Shannon |
Todd Embers |
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| 4/19/2002 2:50:03 AM |
Not much I can add to this that hasn't already been said. It's quite fabulous. I congratulate you both. Great Work!
Todd |
Lavender Rose |
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| 4/19/2002 2:52:32 AM |
Speeechless!!!!!!! |
Silkie |
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| 5/2/2002 10:30:32 AM |
Thanks
Shannon for choosing our poem to be featured. I'm so honored! Thank all
of you for your warm sentiments and of course thank you most of all
Janine for working with me on this, without you it wouldn't have been
what it became!
Silkie |
Tiff |
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| 5/2/2002 10:32:59 AM |
WOW an intense write. I love the title and a well deserved win indeed! Congrats Janine and Silkie!
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Tammy |
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| 7/9/2005 12:56:24 PM |
DAMN! some good writing here. I held on for one intense ride.
QUOTE Place your lips upon my rigid length Your bloodied kiss sends me into a swoon Moments before I slip from your grasp And fall plummeting to the floor
MORE! |
Stephen |
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| 7/9/2005 12:58:59 PM |
Oh I totally agree. This is some intense writing. Another good collab I have read here on the board.
QUOTE I shiver with anticipation As you slowly run your finger Along my finely honed edge Leaving a slight trace of blood And teasing me with the taste As I hunger with a thirst That is craving to be fed
I really do like that part, craving to be fed? Yummy!
Stephen |
Cheyanne |
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| 7/11/2005 10:08:42 AM |
Every
line in this Janine is intense. I think they both used a good word on
this "Intense". But I like to add a few more, dramatic and erotic in a
dark way.
*Cheyanne* |
Kathy |
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| 7/13/2005 9:04:47 AM |
I
do not know what I can say that has not already been said. This is a
very powerful piece! Not many collabs can turn out this well where both
writers can blend this good. |
beckie_91 |
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| 7/19/2005 4:15:07 AM |
QUOTE Place your lips upon my rigid length Your bloodied kiss sends me into a swoon Moments before I slip from your grasp And fall plummeting to the floor
i
thought this was a really good poem you probably dont know me but im
new im 14 and my mother is lhrdina90 i hope we have a chance to talk one
day ... keep up the good work |
Blueberry Kitten |
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| 8/16/2005 5:33:57 AM |
Seductive! How is that hussy? You two are wildly entertaining.
Curtis |
ThaPoeticFire |
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| 8/16/2005 5:35:10 AM |
Saucy and dark passions abound... |
MysticWings575 |
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| 8/16/2005 5:36:25 AM |
Very powerful.
~Mystic~ |
whatup64106 |
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| 8/16/2005 5:38:17 AM |
Wow! Great poem and great title, fits it so well. |
lanaia74 |
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| 8/19/2005 8:48:21 AM |
AWESOME! Totally awesome. |
poeticpiers |
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| 8/19/2005 9:33:47 AM |
A deadly duologue that rings all too true self mutilation is nothing new and it will last until fashions change or death decides to re arrange the ways that he can advertise an express trip to paradise |
Tiffany |
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| 1/21/2006 7:36:50 AM |
What powerful writing this is. Very erotic!
~Tiff |
lhrdina90 |
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| 1/21/2006 7:39:41 AM |
This
is so powerful and written with such passion, this was tremendously
painful to read for me, felt my throat close and my heart pounding with
every word, I have seen that place and pray to never see it again. Very
well written and absolutely very well done.
Bravo you two, just amazing how it flowed together.
Lori |
Janine Daniel | janine@spinnys.com | www.spinnys.com | 1/22/2006 10:09:55 AM |
Thanks Tiffany and Lori for your comments.
Erotic Tiffany?....well, maybe just a little bit. ;)
Lori,
I know it's a hard subject to talk about and awful too. The poem
doesn't reflect in any way my personal views on this subject. I was
following Silkie's lead who started the topic. |
lhrdina90 |
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| 1/22/2006 10:11:22 AM |
NO worries Janine, I think you followed very well and that both you and Silkie, write beautifully together.
Lori |
Sharon Wilshire |
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| 1/22/2006 10:12:50 AM |
It certainly kept me entangled in its web.
~Sharon |
Tammy |
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| 2/1/2006 9:21:57 AM |
Oh my.... some
pretty serious writing here Janine never knew you had this in you my
dear! Damn good to see another side. I love to see variety in writers.
I really like the ending,
From where I'm lying here in your hand I can sense your fear Yet feel your anticipation as you Place your lips upon my rigid length Your bloodied kiss sends me into a swoon Moments before I slip from your grasp And fall plummeting to the floor
Awesome write!
~Tammy |