6/5/2001 5:57:15 PM
Knowing you're there for me
when I've had a tiring day
is enough to keep me from going astray
like a mirage in the distance
to a thirsty woman.
To have you listening to me
when I whinge and moan
and I'm not being very nice
is like a mirage in the distance
to my troubled psyche.
To feel your arms hold me
when I can't go on any more
makes me feel secure and warm
like a mirage in the distance
to a weary traveller.
To know that you love me
when I'm feeling old and sad
is a balm to me
like a mirage in the distance
to a lost soul.
By: Janine Daniel
Author's Comments
What can I say except eu te amo sempre.Janine Daniel | janine@spinnys.com | www.spinnys.com | 10/10/2005 4:09:48 AM |
This poem received Poem Of The Week award by Roses In Bloom, Flowing Quills forum, 8th Oct. 2005. | |||
SandDollar1 | 10/10/2005 4:11:14 AM | ||
Congrats, Janine. Annette | |||
Alaura dus | 10/10/2005 4:12:42 AM | ||
congratulations on the POW, Janine :) I've had an incredibly diffuclt couple of weeks at work..and your poem so fits the way I feel when I finally pull in my driveway at the end of the day and see Joel wating there for me. It's PERFECT :) ~Alaura | |||
janmew | 10/10/2005 4:14:12 AM | ||
Janine, this is SO true. Beautifully written. Congratulations on the award for this one this week! :) Jan | |||
Sweetly Sensitive | 6/5/2001 9:25:05 PM | ||
Janine, you're on a roll girl....these are all wonderful!!!!!!! This is my favorite however:)) | |||
Cat | 6/6/2001 11:58:30 PM | ||
Wow!....I Love this Poem.....Gonna study it in more depth later when I have more time. | |||
MysticWings575 | 10/6/2005 3:59:20 AM | ||
Having that special someone there makes all the difference in the world. Beautiful Janine. I liked this a lot. Mystic | |||
joelsz | 10/6/2005 4:01:20 AM | ||
Very well said. The real measure of love is knowing it's okay to be however you are at that moment; even if you're not at your best. Real love understands. I enjoyed this. .. Joelsz | |||
Janine Daniel | janine@spinnys.com | www.spinnys.com | 10/6/2005 4:02:37 AM |
Nominated for Poem Of The Week by Roses In Bloom, Flowing Quills forum, 5th Oct. 2005. | |||
Wanda Fable Weaver | 10/6/2005 4:04:44 AM | ||
Janine,
To have that one who loves you, lifts you up, teases you when you are
down, and surprises you with something special...That is a mirage in the
distance. Well written, and touches the heart.. Wanda | |||
poeticpiers | 10/14/2005 5:39:52 AM | ||
Love accepts you as you are, warts and all, nicely expressed Janine, well deserving of recognition. ivor | |||
MrLeslie | 10/16/2005 4:53:33 AM | ||
CONGRATULATIONS on an award so well deserved Janine. :) Beautiful writing and beautiful to read. Well done lady! It's a treasure. MrLeslie. | |||
Michelle | 10/19/2005 4:55:54 AM | ||
Hi
Janine. You must be an artist too! Wow, what talent. The repetition
works very well in this poem, imo. The poem and artwork are just
gorgeous, Janine, and inspiring. You make me feel like writing another
love poem. best to you, Michelle |
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